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“I don’t care what the boy is doing in his free time, there’s so much clay anyway! But these sculptures he makes… something about them makes me uneasy.
Too lifelike. One evening as I was going back home, the dancing shadows cast some kind of motion on them, and I ran away. Does he… is that not sacrilegious, what he’s doing?”
Ibarro the Tilemaster
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Old description :
Ah! Won’t be able to get much futher until Monday, it’s already 2AM here^^. So here’s a nearly-finished page, see you soon for the polished version 🙂
Old version
At first I thought it was: Cat’s sleeping; couldn’t make that sound anyway. Then: I ate too much cabbage and cheese, therefore, I could be making those sounds.
Hahaha, that would mean Lao’s only getting cats that have the same face she has!
But, point taken, again. I’m definitely adding that to the pile of pages that need improvement. Thank you.
I’m not sleeping. Yes I ate so not hallucinating from hunger…crap, left my staff in the cart. CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP! (whilst running to get staff)
That’s pretty much it! Initially I wanted to do food poisoning instead of hunger, but I had no idea of how to convey this efficiently.^^
It’s the same graphic, but the steam has a skull & crossbones.
That could work! For now I’m focusing on the next page though^^
This one is unsure they have fully grasped the subtleties of a portion of this piece.
Is the “X” and “✔”, “Sleeping-No” and “Food-Yes”?
Yeah, I agree that this needs some fine-tuning, I’d like to improve the visual path too… this is why I’m always mixed about sharing half-done pages. Well, next one should be on time and complete.
OK, I’m officially super confused.
Answers soon! 🙂
Mongol wandering trader hears a voice “You can take it if you want it”.
Mongol immediately thinks, “Am I asleep and dreaming?” “No.” “Did I eat, is this a hallucination from starving?” “No”. “Where did I leave my staff/spear?” “12 steps behind me on the cart.”
Mongol hears a ‘TP’ (foot/hoof step noise) and engages run-run-run-run-run mode…
Now, where is our Littlest Warrior? Who is speaking? Is it Murder Stag come for another victim?
These and many other questions will be answered in the next installment of ‘Littlest Mongol Trader”…
Speaking of which, do you find the finished version more understandable?